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The "abcd" song

  • Apr 30, 2015
  • Indie
  • English
Main info
Genre Indie
Language English
Tempo mid-Tempo
Mood
  • Melancholic
Voice female
Author Chalam, Vocal:Juli, Composer: Gerry M Peters
Release date 2015
Release artist Looking for a female vocalist.
Song Description
Angels send a promised one for you, but sadly watch him go for someone new. Cupid fights to hold back more tears, didn’t my man latch on to another for dear? Another dawn will knock on my door, bring more pain just like the ones before. Can time erase the lasting reason why, dreams have slowly withered away to die. A part of me dies in silence every day, burnt by his heart that rained lies to slip away. Can’t ask for one painless night when he’s drowned me in a loneliness that's breaking me. After he broke away I’m not the same, but I really can’t stop thinking of his name. Cold memories stay to haunt my mind, darkness hurts again with no answer to find. Answers are what I’m searching for, but I don’t find one in those hurting hours. Can’t heal my heart break every day, don’t god’s question souls that stray away? A part of me dies in silence every day, burnt by his heart that rained lies to slip away. Can’t ask for one painless night when he’s drowned me in loneliness that eyes hate to see. A part of me dies.. in… silence, every day.
Author info
Please take a close look at the lyrics; I have made changes to it after I received the demo from Gerry. It's simple & different. Please look up Gerry Peter's website for making grand demos,http://www.gprecordingstudio.com/ :)
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Votes and comments

David Ian Hardwick
David Ian Hardwick 7/7/15 6:43 PM
"Well done overall, takes a while to reach the chorus ;-)"
Thomas Alexander
Thomas Alexander 6/4/15 4:14 PM
"I listened to your song A Part of Me That Dies, a really nice ballad sang extremely well, it would be interesting to hear it as a Pop/R&B ballad"
Electric Blue Waves
Electric Blue Waves 5/29/15 11:42 AM
"Classic!"
Jürgen J. Fischer
Jürgen J. Fischer 5/29/15 11:30 AM
"To melt away"
Josef Becker
Josef Becker 5/23/15 1:27 PM
"a beautiful, touching song !"
Tyler Ling
Tyler Ling 5/8/15 2:36 PM
"very good production!"
Eric Jacques Louis  Birnbaum  Didorion
Eric Jacques Louis Birnbaum Didorion 5/2/15 12:23 PM
"A1 ballad"
Fred Rohan Vargas
Fred Rohan Vargas 5/1/15 3:35 PM
"Very moving. Very nice."
PAUL B ALLEN III
PAUL B ALLEN III 4/7/15 4:09 PM
"Beautiful and warm tune!"
Allen Johnston
Allen Johnston 3/16/15 4:13 AM
Jochen Schaumann
Jochen Schaumann 3/7/15 8:12 PM
"nice lyrics and unusual vocal lines"
cesli vane
cesli vane 3/6/15 3:10 PM
"Very emotive, poetic and the singer's voice acts like "a hot knife through butter""
LUIGINO SARCONE
LUIGINO SARCONE 3/3/15 2:10 PM
"GOOD SONG! GOOD TEXT!"
Uwe Schmidt
Uwe Schmidt 3/1/15 5:51 AM
"Beautiful harmonies!"
Mario Christiani
Mario Christiani 2/27/15 12:27 PM
Paul van Ackeren
Paul van Ackeren 2/25/15 5:43 PM
"Beautiful vocal lines!"
twin league s&p
twin league s&p 2/25/15 2:20 PM
"straight to the heart!"
Sebastian Kozlowski
Sebastian Kozlowski 2/25/15 11:57 AM
"Very beautiful Chalam!!! Sooo good!!!"
John Meisel
John Meisel 2/24/15 6:20 PM
"VERY GOOD...(and GOD won't question anyone who is willing to change for the better :-)"
Reiner Keller
Reiner Keller 2/24/15 6:01 PM
"Beatiful Song !!"